Monday, May 31, 2010

Deeper 45 pages 45 minutes

Dear Ms. Kugler,
Drake, Will, Elliot, and Chester quickly made their way over to the cave where Cal weas thought to have died in. Drake said that it was a sugar trap that Cal walked into. It realeases white spores that paralyze you. Then it slowly digests you. They made it to the cavern which still had white spores floating around. Then Drake ran in to try and get Cal out.
I think that Drake might barely make it out. If he does, then Cal might barely be alive. I wonder how Drake will get Cal to get moving again. If he's still alive.
Intrude- trespass
Appall- to fill with consternation or dismay
Emerge- come out

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