Dear Ms. Kugler,
Drake came running out of the cave with Cal. Cal was all blue and still wasn't breathing. Drake ran down to a nearby canal and pushed Cal's head ubderwater. Then he pulled him out and started to slap him as had as he could. He siad that shock was the onl way to save. Then Cal started to cough!
I think that Will is going to trust Drake a lot more now. He has saved his seemingly dead brother. I think that Will will also be happier. His brother is back, but I think that he will be a little week.
Irreverance- lack of reverance or due respect
Reprimand- scold
Alternative- another choice
Tuesday, June 1, 2010
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